University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies.Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages
Many students
are prefer
to pursue their Change the verb form
prefer
study
in
abroad to achieve higher degrees. In Change preposition
apply
initial
days they face few difficulties Correct article usage
the initial
such
as language
barriers and racism. But when they achieved their degrees they become able to get better jobs all over the world. In my opinion, advantages
of studying overseas outweigh the disadvantages.
Correct article usage
the advantages
To begin
with, the first
and foremost difficulty they face is language
barriers due to native languages which They are not much familiar with other Countrie's
speaking Correct your spelling
Countries
language
. It becomes hinder in case of emergencies. For instance
, one of my cousin
went Change to a plural noun
cousins
japan
for Change preposition
to japan
study
purpose there he had some medical issues and he did not clarify his issue to the doctor. So, language
becomes major
hindrance when someone wants to Add an article
a major
study
overseas.
On the other hand
, There
are many advantages for Correct your spelling
there
the
overseas students. Correct article usage
apply
Firstly
, When an individual completes his studies then
there are plethora
of job opportunities in better companies. He Add an article
a plethora
secure
his future when he studies in Change the verb form
secures
foreign
Correct article usage
a foreign
well reputed
college or university. Add a hyphen
well-reputed
Secondly
, pupil
learns about the different cultures and skills from different countries. One can make many friends of various countries with whom he studies. Add an article
the pupil
For instance
, my friend is postgraduate
from Oxford University, London. Now he is the system manager in Wipro company. So, students can achieve their aim by studying overseas.
To conclude, despite Correct article usage
a postgraduate
their
are some drawbacks Replace the word
there
such
as language
barriers but a student can achieve a successful life and more job opportunities when they study
in other countries.Submitted by Rajwinder Kaur on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...