In the past when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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Studying abroad has been embraced by the community in the past few years. The number of foreign undergraduate in
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region increases each year.
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has its advantages and disadvantages which I will try to highlight a few in
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text. Keeping in mind that
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have lots of brilliant young
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, but due to the situations of their
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, might never amount to anything great in life, developed
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of governmental/non-governmental organizations (as well as individual citizens), have designed the scholarship systems that favour a
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of foreign
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. Some of these scholarships not only cover the tuition but
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, the cost of accommodations, feeding, generally the cost of living.
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has given lots of promising young public hope and a future. Studying abroad is
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a form of tourism. In recent years, few
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have moved from studying in just developed
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to choosing
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like the Caribbeans, Philipines etc. Students who
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abroad, get to not just
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experience the cultures of whatever
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they choose to
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in. They get to eat the food, meet and have conversations with the
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, sometimes, learn the language (safe to say studying abroad is making the world a global village). As earlier stated, studying abroad has its disadvantages too. Students who
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in well-developed
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, almost never return to their home country.
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is mostly the case for a
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. you would expect them to take whatever they learnt and use it for the development of their own
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but
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almost never happens. When students graduate from some universities, they are sometimes offered internships which are usually too good to say no.
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is one of the leading causes of the brain drain being experienced in a continent like Africa. The culture of certain
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is gradually becoming extinct as most of the young individuals are leaving these
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in droves in search of a better life. Putting into consideration the age some
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are before they go to university, they might not be aware of a
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of the cultural norms in their home country. they go to these
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a young age, get exposed to the cultures and most times adapt to those. Like everything in life, there's always a positive and negative aspect to things but finding the balance is always key to making sure we have a better world.
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