Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extant do you agree or disagree?

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In
this
concrete
world
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forest are becoming vanish.
Although
many inhabitants believed that, it is significant of planting
trees
in the defoliated area
such
as countryside, or downtown rather than constructing houses. I support
this
statement to a large extent for some reasons.
This
essay will substantiate views in the following paragraph with relevant examples. There are numerous reasons that cutting down
trees
causes many alarming problems not only ecologically but
also
, environmentally. On the one hand, despite the fact that, as we moving
further
we need a roof overhead as we called our own house and its plays a vital role in an individuals life, yet, building our own future we ruining the ecosystem. To embark with my key reasons to support my ideology is that, planting
trees
are really important to breathe safe and natural air. As we all know, living in an urban area means breathe unhealthy air of the pollution which factory produces emissions those have harmful chemicals and because of
this
we losing up a healthy lifestyle,
nevertheless
, the bad air not only cause breathing problems but
also
it has many detrimental effects on our body.
On the other hand
, cutting down
trees
has many long
tearm
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alarming problems,
some
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predictions state that the rainforests of the world will be eradicated if deforestation continues at its current pace. If we started rising plants that would
bering
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bring
us many benefits
such
as fruits, vegetables and healthy lifestyle and for that
reason
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if we chop down woods for building houses
then
we have to plant
trees
wherever we get empty space. To conclude, considering above mentioned points it is evident that,
although
homo sapiens have needs
which
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fulfilled by cutting
trees
individuals have look into
they
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do
mentain
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maintain
mountain
eco system
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ecosystem
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of
earth
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the earth
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.
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the way
i
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looking at it,
i
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completely agree with the statement that planting
trees
are necessary to where we found empty space.
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