Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extant do you agree or disagree?
In
this
concrete world
forest are becoming vanish. Add a comma
,world
Although
many inhabitants believed that, it is significant of planting trees
in the defoliated area such
as countryside, or downtown rather than constructing houses. I support this
statement to a large extent for some reasons. This
essay will substantiate views in the following paragraph with relevant examples.
There are numerous reasons that cutting down trees
causes many alarming problems not only ecologically but also
, environmentally. On the one hand, despite the fact that, as we moving further
we need a roof overhead as we called our own house and its plays a vital role in an individuals life, yet, building our own future we ruining the ecosystem. To embark with my key reasons to support my ideology is that, planting trees
are really important to breathe safe and natural air. As we all know, living in an urban area means breathe unhealthy air of the pollution which factory produces emissions those have harmful chemicals and because of this
we losing up a healthy lifestyle, nevertheless
, the bad air not only cause breathing problems but also
it has many detrimental effects on our body.
On the other hand
, cutting down trees
has many long tearm
alarming problems, Correct your spelling
term
some
predictions state that the rainforests of the world will be eradicated if deforestation continues at its current pace. If we started rising plants that would Change the capitalization
Some
bering
us many benefits Correct your spelling
bring
such
as fruits, vegetables and healthy lifestyle and for that reason
if we chop down woods for building houses Add a comma
,reason
then
we have to plant trees
wherever we get empty space.
To conclude, considering above mentioned points it is evident that, although
homo sapiens have needs which
fulfilled by cutting Correct pronoun usage
apply
trees
individuals have look into they
do Correct your spelling
the
mentain
Correct your spelling
maintain
mountain
eco system
of Correct your spelling
ecosystem
earth
. Add an article
the earth
As
the way Replace the word
Like
i
looking at it, Change the capitalization
I
i
completely agree with the statement that planting Change the capitalization
I
trees
are necessary to where we found empty space.Submitted by ankitacommon on
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