Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this.

It is undeniable that the

media

is one of the best and easy ways to spread the word. Especially, Nowadays the Internet is the crucial technology that made all of

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communication easier and faster than before, So

people

are heavily influenced by the news on social. From my point of view, I personally agree with

this

viewpoint for many reasons, described in the following paragraphs.

To begin

with, in many countries the government uses

media

to their own advantage and try to control

people

's opinions via News.

For example

in North Korea

people

are strictly limited from other

media

, they can’t read or find out anything by themselves. except The news and information are allowed from the North Korean government. That the reasons why the government can

controls

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the population’ opinions and attitudes so easily. Only a Few

people

can seek the truth owning to everything in the country is blocked

Likewise

, Some democratic countries

also

got

this

problem. Not only

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sector but

also

Trading

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the Trading

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sector. There are a lot of bad business groups or political parties in each country

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social

media

like Facebook, IG or Tiktok to promote

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their business and the pieces of information were recorded in a huge database in order to analyze data. After that, they can use the data to inoculate in

people

’s mind

for instance

Donald Trump won the election by using Facebook ads. In conclusion,

people

have been dominated for years by the

media

from everywhere.

Besides

, In the era of globalization, a politician and The rich can control opinions and attitudes of the

people

by using data in the social

media

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