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Although there is a lot of translation software available, learning a language still could be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#translation #software #language
Nowadays, various kind of
language
 translator application and software present in the market. Because at it people should be required to learn an international
language
 honestly. I tend to disagree with
this
 statement.
Further
, I will give the suitable reasons
then
 reach a logical conclusion. In
this
 contemporary era, Technology improves rapidly with being helpful to humans. There are many kinds of
language
 software available archaic one control by online and offline mode but it’s not useful in all circumstances because the accuracy of that program is not accurate in all situations. It is useful in short term conversations.
For instance
, when the two different nation’s government employees meet regarding the global issue that time they always have their own speech linguist who is human.
On the other hand
,
this
 program has some positive points which are it is useful in the find meaning of words, for sentences translation.
For example
, if a person buys medicine and the description on the box is in another
language
 in one’s own accent by using a translator. In the conclusion, if a person wants to talk with people
then
 it is essential to learn a foreign
language
 but the linguist operating system always fulfil the requirement of brief Conversations
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