Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today's world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?

It is true that in today's busy world
zoos
have no place to exist and it would be a good idea to have them completely shut down sooner than later. In fact,
zoos
are against animal welfares, which can impact their health and the ability to mate.
This
essay will explore those problems in more details and come up with some alternative solutions. The most important problem caused by
zoos
is the fact that animals have captured in a cage or a small area which is against their right of moving around.
In other words
, human has somehow interfered with their life for their own selfish purpose and prevent them from freely moving around.
Moreover
, by feeding them with processed and premade food we have
also
banning them to normally quest for food which is part of their normal life.
Besides
, we by removing them from their home, we have
also
interfered with the way they mate and offsprings putting them in danger of extinction. The question that rise is how can we learn about animals without having to capture them in
zoos
. The answer is simple, nowadays with the advancement of technology we can put small cameras everywhere from the deep level of seas to as high as the top of the highest mountains. In
this
,way we will be able to learn about them while they are living in their own environment. The other alternative would be to create virtual
zoos
and invite kids and animal lovers to places and create different educational rooms with experts explaining about each of them. Having
zoos
around cities have always been a problem and was always a subject for many debates.
First
of ,all it's against animal wellbeings and the right to separate them from their normal environment and by doing that we
also
prevent them from finding their mates and regenerate.
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