“Some people believe that managers are responsible for the company's success, while others think various features of the organization play vital role in it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.”

The debate over whether the government is in charge

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providing a healthy life for

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citizens or if

individuals

' own contributions play a more vital role still remains contentious. Some argue that the government must build more infrastructure and ban unhealthy products that may cause severe problems for health .

However

, another point of view suggests that only

individuals

are the ones who are responsible for being healthy.

This

essay will examine both viewpoints and offer a personal perspective.

To begin

, it’s evident that providing infrastructure

such

as open-air gyms and sports centres will encourage people to do more beneficial activities. A good example of

this

is my hometown city Astana where local authorities obligated contractors to construct at least one open-air gym in each micro district.

As a result

, we have accessible sports places for youth in each part of the town.

While

this

argument is valid, others might argue that people shouldn’t rely on others and make changes on their own. There are many cases, when people were able to maintain a decent physique with a lack of infrastructure.

This

situation is typical for poor countries, especially in Africa. In my personal opinion,

individuals

do not have to wait for changes and make alterations on their own. In case I had to do some exercises to support my health, I couldn’t wait for the government’s action

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but do some activities at home. To sum

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government definitely can inspire citizens to live a healthy lifestyle,

however

, the final decision to make some alterations still stands in favour of

individuals

.