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In many countries schools have severe problems with students behavior. What do you think are the cause of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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It is true that nowadays in many parts of the
schools
 are facing some
problems
 associated with
students
 behaviour. There are many attributes to
this
 kind of
problems
, but the most important is physical punishment in
schools
 and solutions can be done by teaching school
discipline
 among
students
.
To begin
 with,
phyiscal
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physical
punishments
 for
students
 in
schools
 might be the
first
 and the main causes of student's bad behaviour style. The reason for
this
 is that there is a lot of negative effects of
phyiscal
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physical
punishments
 leading to different types of antisocial performance
such
 as bullying and stealing.
As a result
, it adverse effects
to
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 other classmates and causes
different
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 kind of
problems
 at
institution
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.
Secondly
, in order to deal with these
problems
schools
 should prohibit
pyhysical
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physical
punishments
instead
 teach
academy
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discipline
. The main goal of teaching academy
discipline
 at
schools
 is to make them learn to behave in
positive
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 manner with
there
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their
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 other fellow
students
 to keep up with
decorum
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 of the institution. Another solution is that teachers should promote the positive nature of
self respect
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, care. In conclusion,
although
 there are lots of
problems
 in
school
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a school
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 associated with student behaviour I strongly believe that physical
punishments
 are the main one among them and I think it can
be reduce
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be reduced
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 by teaching academy
discipline
 to
students
.
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