Many major cities are facing a housing crisis as they cannot provide enough land for new buildings. Some local governments believe the problem could be solved by reassigning park land for residential development, because this land would be better used for housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many big cities are

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attractive sites for

people

and families who are looking for

opporttunities

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opportunities

.

This

, with the increasing population, has caused a housing

dillema

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dilemma

. both

governemntal

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governmental

government

and housing companies think that they could solve the issue by

turnning

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turning

parks

into

appartments

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apartments

and houses as they

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belive

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this

is a better investment

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land. In my opinion, I completely disagree with

this

misuse of greenery landscape as they are very important and there are, indeed, many other better solutions.

Parks

and gardens in the great cities are of great value.

Firstly

, in

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crowded

city

,

public

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need to enjoy

close by

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outdoor life and chill from time to time especially with the stressful lifestyle in a

city

.

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,

Parks

are

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place for families to socialise, for kids to play, and for local events and celebration to be conducted.

In addition

, green spaces are healthy, not just that they provide

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supply of fresh oxygen but

also

the open landscape is of

a scientifically reported benefits

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to the eye and the mental health.

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,

such

establishments are of

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significant need and should not be abolished.

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Of course

, there are many other relevant

soultions

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solutions

to consider. Foremost,

buidling

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building

companies and governmental strategies should focus on the

city

outskirts.

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A lot

of these places are underdeveloped and possess spacious lands.

This

will provide work

oppotunities

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opportunities

and encourage more

people

to go to rural places where they will be more likely needed. Another good

suggestions

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is

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to adopt more modern engineering that

invest

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in buildings, namely skyscrapers, that house more

people

in less space of the land without cramping

people

.

Such

technology and development should be utilized.

Therefore

, there are several pathways states can go to before

jeopradising

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jeopardising

jeopardizing

greenery in a cramped

city

. In conclusion, despite that providing good homes for populations in the cities is a difficult problem, authorities should not abolish

parks

. I believe that park

are

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of many merits and that we need to preserve them, as well as, there are other worthy

cannels

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channels

that could solve

this

situation.