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in many countries schoolhave severe problems with students behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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Children
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 learn
behaviour
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 from their parent, teacher, and friends. Most of the countries face issue regarding scholars
behaviour
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 in
school
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. Let us discuss the reasons behind
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 and its solutions. The predominant cause of misbehaviourbehaviour in students, their relationship with their
parents
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. Many
children
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's
parents
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 bonding with each other is not good that affect on their child
behaviour
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. They live most of their time at home and live in a stressful environment which impacts their attitude. They develop a negative personality which clearly seen in their body
language
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, attitude, and
behaviour
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.
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,
children
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 watch movies at an early age, many films have smoking, drinking, violence, and bad
language
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. Youngster sees
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 as a cool person and tries to imitate it in the
school
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.
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, many
children
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 speak a bad
language
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 in
school
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 with other classmates as well as with the teachers. It does not seem nice to use that kind of
language
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 and
behaviour
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 in the classroom. It has a bad effect on other
children
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. Every problem has a solution.
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 of all, schools should teach their teachers and new recruiters some extra training regarding bad
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 among
children
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. To illustrate my point, social bonding and special skills
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 as therapy session in the schools that help those
children
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 how has a problem in their
behaviour
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, find out their
behaviour
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 and give them proper counselling.
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,
parents
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 should look after their kids like what they watch on tv, what they do in their free time, and most important with whom they meet. All these help their
children
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 to become
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good citizen.
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,
parents
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 should take
children
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 to do some community work and help other people. The same thing they do at the
school
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 with other
children
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. To conclude, in every country and every person has some kind of problem with them. All those problems should be solved by helping them. Human beings are social beings we should communicate with each other.
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