Some people think it is no longer necessary for children to go to school because they can do all their learning online. Others believe learning in schools is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The increasing availability of different educational

resoures

Correct your spelling

resources

on the internet has caused some to argue that pupils can study at

home

from these virtual teaching

programms

Correct your spelling

programmes

programs

while some others still hold the view that going to school is

necessity

Add an article

a necessity

show examples

for proper education.

Although

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

online platforms have enriched the learning journey, I

believ

Correct your spelling

believe

that schools are

indispensible

Correct your spelling

indispensable

. It is argued that studying at

home

is beneficial for both students and the community.

Firstly

, all different sources of materials are available to kids in different forms of online classes, demonstrations, cartoons, books, and

softwares

Correct your spelling

software

that monitor their progress.

Nonetheless

, teachers and parents can still supervise their study and a more tailored approach to their specific needs can be followed better than the general approach in classrooms. Hypothesizing

this

means time and money wasted on school's uniforms, travels, and other needs will be saved.

In other words

, local government and community will benefit from

this

money by supporting

home

learning and for helping other sectors,

for

example

Add the comma(s)

,example

show examples

health ministry or local parks.

However

, many people still support schools and I agree that they are

irreplacable

Correct your spelling

irreplaceable

. Foremost, a child staying at

home

means that their carer

need

Change the verb form

needs

show examples

to be present with the extra task of teaching. Nowadays, most parents are working to cope with life demands which

makes

Change the verb form

make

show examples

homeschooling

not

Add the comma(s)

,not

show examples

a valid option.

For instance

, witnessing a global pandemic that enforced educational facilities closure and studying or working from

home

has caused

a

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

tremendouse

Correct your spelling

tremendous

stress and depression to both children and their family.

Moreover

, the online sources are not enough and learners need the class motivation not less than their need for socialising with their peers for their emotional, social, and psychological development.

Furthermore

, most schools are fostering

flexible

Correct article usage

a flexible

show examples

teaching system where the student can choose

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

a variety of subjects that are tailored to particular needs. In conclusion, the presence of several teaching websites and tools are of huge benefits but it will never replace a school environment.

Correct your spelling

After all

show examples

Afterall

Correct your spelling

After all

show examples

, is it really just about feeding

informations

Change the wording

information

pieces of information

show examples

?