One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think advantages are outweigh the disadvantages.
The noun phrase medical field seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
The noun phrase explanation seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The plural verb play does not appear to agree with the singular subject Health. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
It appears that the phrase lot does not contain the correct article usage. Consider making a change.
It appears that machineries is an uncountable noun and should not be made plural. Consider changing the noun.
The noun phrase fight seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that the comma after such as is unnecessary. Consider removing it.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
The plural verb are does not appear to agree with the singular subject disease. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It appears that the form of the verb give does not work with are in this sentence.
The noun phrase vaccine seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The noun phrase success seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The noun phrase vaccine seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The singular noun year follows a number other than one. Consider changing the noun to the plural form.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
The word polio virus seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.
The plural form of be are does not seem to agree with the singular subject number. Consider changing the verb form.
It appears that the phrase number does not contain the correct article usage. Consider making a change.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase because of the vaccine of it. Consider adding a comma.
The word success doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
The adjective other appears to be modifying the singular noun side. Consider making a change.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase To begin with. Consider adding a comma.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
The plural form of be are does not seem to agree with the singular subject number. Consider changing the verb form.
It appears that the phrase number does not contain the correct article usage. Consider making a change.
The noun phrase nation seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The noun phrase long life seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The word retirement doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
It appears that the verb hold should be in the past participle form. Consider changing it.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase for them. Consider adding a comma.
The word them doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example