Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.

There are rising voices that demand the legal system to put an end to murderers.
However
, these are opposed by some activists who think that killing is not accepted even if it was a punishment. There are merits and demerits to
this
,
however
, I believe that in modern
society
, the legal system should not prosecute people to death and should do better than that. Interestingly, there is some logically convincing argument that there are benefits from sentencing criminals to death. Foremost, sentencing a killer to be killed will not just protect the
society
from their evil actions in future but from others with hidden vicious intentions.
In other words
, punishing a murderer as
such
will set an example to others of the great consequences of
this
horrible act and
hence
, reduce the crime rate.
Moreover
, Capital punishment will bring justice to the diseased and to their family as it will assure the family and the
society
of the effectiveness and the presence of the justice system and that they can rely on.
However
, the great disadvantages regarding death sentence can not be ignored. Notably,
this
is an inhumane act and should not be acceptable in modern
society
where human life, rights, and values are cherished and protected. There are different elements related to
this
.
Firstly
, killing the offender will not bring the dead back. indeed, the doer should be punished severely but there are different options that can be considered
instead
of taking a life
such
as
life
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sentence.
This
way, the community can benefit from that person.
Moreover
, dealing intelligently with
this
situation will send the message that human lives are valuable can not
taken
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lightly even by authority.
Also
, who
know
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? people can always repent and change, can not they? In conclusion,
Although
there are conflicting opinions regarding
this
critical issue as people can see benefits and drawbacks with it, we as a human should promote mercy, forgiveness, and should deal with
such
matters with more wisdom and intelligence.
Instead
of losing two spirits, we may be able to save one soul.
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