Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this.

These days we are all living in a world full of speakers, from the billboard on the expressway to the social
media
on our phone. We are all the listeners to the unintentional speakers. Most of the time, listeners are controlled easily and unavoidable, sometimes they are willing to be controlled.
Firstly
, we experience the mind-controlled
media
surrounding us all the time, camouflaged in the shape of tv spot on the screen, the sound spot when we go shopping in the supermarket, the advertisement on our social
media
feed. These
media
secretly controlled us.
For example
, the advertisement speaks to you
everyday
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while you commute to work on the subway about how good the advertised product is in repeat, on the
next
day you might go to the shop and get them. It is an effect from the
media
that hypnotize you to do or think in the way they desire without your recognition.
Furthermore
, people mostly followed their
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people on various kinds of social
media
platforms,
that is
why the career of ‘Influencer’ are very popular
this
day. They are the true controller of today’s
media
. Due to the power of their leading skill, the more they can lead the audience completely, the more they are paid
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the advertising agency. The followers are tendent to listen and believe in their
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influencers most.
For example
, there are many famous beauty bloggers in Thailand, when they shared the products they use in their daily makeup routine, those products become popular and out of stock rapidly.
This
is a form of controlling people’s mind with their own decision.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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