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It has been argued that we should be cautious about the effects of Artificial Intelligence on humanity in the future. To what extent do you agree?

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In the ultramodern epoch, it is a point of debate that artificial intelligence becoming rapidly increasing and will be harmful to the future generation. Undoubtedly,
this
 notion remains successful in keeping the majority in its favour. The upcoming paragraph will cast on my viewpoint related to the very conception. I wholeheartedly accord with the statement that
machine
 becoming take place of a human.
This
 myriad reason in favour of my arguments. The most prominent one is human become will lazy on their responsibility. In simple word now
machine
 handles the work of human and
machine
 make work easy. Individuals are becoming addicted to using the
machine
.
In addition
, artificial intelligence will reduce employment in every area. Like we can explain, now the
machine
 can do everything which a person does not can do and computer can do multitask at the same time and
also
 can handle work of 2 or 3 people. So
this
 effect will definitely reduce the employment. To add a few more reason, how can one forget about the
machine
 can do only those thing which they are programmed to do. They can make relation with other colleagues.
This
 will bad impact on the organisation behaviour. There are cons of AI
this
 technology is very expensive because
this
 is very complex and it takes lots of money to build. On the final note, I am of the opinion that artificial intelligence is very helpful for human but we should consider the limitations of
this
 technology.
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