Competition for university study is becoming increasingly strong. Why are universities becoming more competitive? Is this a positive or negative development?

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part of mankind's life and

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can be, even, seen in school admissions as well. Presently, enrolling

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graduate course is highly competitive in many ways as the

university

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requires only exceptionally talented

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. I, personally, think that it is a positive trend since it definitely

produce

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qualified graduates. One of the main reasons why it is so difficult to get a seat in college is that pupils

of

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these days are highly qualified and all of them prefer to get

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admission into a

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. Eventually, there may be too many

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apply for the same seat.

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, it has been noted that having a degree is considered

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a symbol of status, so secondary school pupils

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wanted to apply the same.

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, since the government ensures free education for all, after passing school education, all of these

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tend to apply

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university

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.

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, I strongly believe that it is an essential and positive trend.

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,

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competition makes sure that only talented

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get admission

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prestigious educational institution.

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, employers can easily offer the graduate

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well-paid jobs since they

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that they are good enough.

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, problematic

students

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cannot be selected by

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university

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and others would be get affected by them.

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,

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Google, a tech giant, offers jobs to graduates from IIT, where

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have been selected after successfully passing 2 level exams. In conclusion, currently, getting a seat for any

graduation

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programme is so difficult.

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, I, think that it is a progressive trend.