Competition for university study is becoming increasingly strong. Why are universities becoming more competitive? Is this a positive or negative development?

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is become

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part of mankind's life and

this

can be, even, seen in school admissions as well. Presently, enrolling

a

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graduate course is highly competitive in many ways as the

university

requires only exceptionally talented

students

. I, personally, think that it is a positive trend since it definitely

produce

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qualified graduates. One of the main reasons why it is so difficult to get a seat in college is that pupils

of

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these days are highly qualified and all of them prefer to get

an

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admission into a

university

. Eventually, there may be too many

students

would

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apply for the same seat.

Similarly

, it has been noted that having a degree is considered

as

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a symbol of status, so secondary school pupils

also

wanted to apply the same.

For example

, since the government ensures free education for all, after passing school education, all of these

students

tend to apply

in

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university

.

Nevertheless

, I strongly believe that it is an essential and positive trend.

Firstly

,

this

competition makes sure that only talented

students

get admission

in

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the

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prestigious educational institution.

As a result

, employers can easily offer the graduate

a

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apply

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well-paid jobs since they

already proven

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have already proven

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that they are good enough.

Moreover

, problematic

students

cannot be selected by

university

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the university

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and others would be get affected by them.

For instance

,

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Google, a tech giant, offers jobs to graduates from IIT, where

students

have been selected after successfully passing 2 level exams. In conclusion, currently, getting a seat for any

graduation

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programme is so difficult.

However

, I, think that it is a progressive trend.