Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Pharmaceutical companies are still using living creatures to
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the safety of their
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. Some people believe
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should be stopped, while others think we should continue with the same practice because it will benefit humanity.
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essay will explore both sides as well as why I believe we should consider alternative methods. It is crucial for pharmaceutical
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to get tested before approved to be used in human. The only reliable method of testing the safety of any
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is to
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it on animals. If we omit
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step, the chance of harmful
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affecting people's health is high.
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, vaccines should be
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be tested on animals before approved to be given to a human.
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, animal experimentation is paramount to prevent unsafe product released in the market.
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, it is cruel to
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unsafe
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on other creatures as well. They have feelings and sensation similar to human.
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, it is against their rights to be caged in the lab and be tested with lots of chemical
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their entire lives.
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, according to 'Today Science" magazine, millions of mice are being killed every year in the process of testing human
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in one of the labs.
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, animal experimentation is unfair and cruel to any creatures. It is my belief that other methods should be used to
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the safety of a product as opposed to using animals. One of
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method is through biotechnology, by testing
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on human cells that are artificially cultured in the lab. which means basically providing the same environment as the body
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of another living being. By doing
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we can save the animal from being tortured in the labs. In conclusion, there are two opposing views regarding the use of animal in experimental labs. I advocate and support the ones that believe
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should be banned.
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