Computers are becoming an essential part of education.discuss advantages and disadvantages

Technology is always a
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sword,it will bring in many benefits,but
also
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significant key role in
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today's
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studies.
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essay
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will suggest not only the benefits of studying from gadgets but
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illustrate the drawbacks of using them. In the past ,children go to school and study from blackboard,but due to the advancement in technology
computers
were invented and very
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beneficial
to mankind especially for students.children no need to worry to get the doubts cleared by teachers,simply they can use
computers
to get the doubts clear.
Moreover
,today there are millions of websites where students can use them to study. By
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student save a lot of time by using them in their curriculum.
For example
in
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survey conducted by times
magzine
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magazine
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published that 80% of
youngters
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youngsters
like
computers
using for their study purpose because of the flexibility and significant amount of content and knowledge getting from them.
On the other hand
,there are cons by using
computers
,sitting in front of electronic devices will cause severe health issues in long run.The foremost problem students are facing
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is eyestrain,where water in the eyes gets evaporated and leading to
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dry eyes
.In the recent
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journal,it is published that 33% of children face dry-eye problem by
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studying
online which is the chronic problem in today's teenagers. To conclude ,
computers
play a vital role in
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education system.Though there are lot many reasons
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using them ,
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there are
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variety of problems in using them
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