You are going to another country to study.You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying,so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter * give details of your study plans * explain why you want to get a part-time job * suggest how your friend could help you find a job Write 150 letters.

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Dear Khushi, I hope you are doing good.I am very excited to give you some news and I am sure you are going to be on cloud nine when you read

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.I decided to move to Mumbai for my higher studies.I opt for chemical laboratory technician.As you know me well and are aware of my passion for chemistry.I always wanted to be a laboratory technician.I feel like

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is made specifically for me.I managed to be admitted to a university which is within walking distance from your place.I was wondering if you could help me find a part-time

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as you know my current financial situation. I am fully dependent on my parents for everything. I wanted to do a part-time

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to help them with some of the bills and university fees.I decided to pay the whole fee all by myself.For

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, I need your help.If you can help me land a

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, it can relieve some burden.I will forever be grateful to you.The university is close to your house so it will be easier for you to connect with some of the employees and help me with the

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search.I am waiting for your response Yours truly

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coherence and cohesion

Consider breaking the letter into more clear paragraphs, each focusing on a single idea to enhance readability.

task achievement

Avoid using very informal phrases like 'on cloud nine' to maintain a more formal tone in a letter requesting help.

task achievement

You have clearly stated your study plans and expressed your excitement about your move, which adds a personal touch to the letter.

coherence and cohesion

The letter is friendly and engaging, setting a warm tone that is suitable when writing to a friend.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

203 words

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