More and more people are finding it increasingly important to wear fashionable clothes. Is this attitude to wearing clothes a positive development or negative?

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Many young
people
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think that being fashionable and wearing the latest items are needed in current trends.
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,
fashion
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has become one of
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the potential
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sectors in creating new
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in society. In my opinion, following the new
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may create many positive developments in several industries,
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as
entertainment
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the entertainment
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industry,
fashion
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industry, or creative industry.
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, we need to note there is
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effect from
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the fast-fashion
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fashion
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trend
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in our lives. On the one hand, being fashionable gives benefits to ourselves. It can boost our moods, be respected in some
jobs
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or occasions, or can create a new job for some
people
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. When we wear the latest
trend
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in
fashion
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, we feel happy and confident.
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,
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some
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and occasions, wearing fashionable clothes makes use being well respected
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people
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and audiences.
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to that,
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creates more opportunities for some
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digitally. A lot of
jobs
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are created in social media,
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as
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influencers or
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content creators. That’s why
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fashion
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develops positive effects for our society.
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, the change of
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trend
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seasonally becomes a new problem that not everyone realizes
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. Fast
fashion
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is one of the contributors
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global warming and global pollution.
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, post-
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production in Indonesia is the big three
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waste contributors. We do not aware that we need many natural resources to produce a new fabric,
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as water and plants.
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, not all
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clothes are recyclable, so the waste can
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pollute and damage
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environment. So that, if we cannot control the fast-
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trend
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and do not move to do upcycle or recycle of the clothes,
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will be a major issue of global warming in the upcoming years. To conclude,
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wearing fashionable staples is important since it can be a self-entertainment, make us well-respected, and can create a new job opportunity,
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has a downside in populating the environment with its fabric waste if we
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the
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control of
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mass production.
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