More and more people are finding it increasingly important to wear fashionable clothes. Is this attitude to wearing clothes a positive development or negative?

Many young
people
think that being fashionable and wearing the latest items are needed in current trends.
Moreover
,
fashion
has become one of
potential
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sectors in creating new
jobs
in society. In my opinion, following the new
trend
may create many positive developments in several industries,
such
as
entertainment
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industry,
fashion
industry, or creative industry.
However
, we need to note there is
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effect from
fast-
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fashion
trend
in our lives. On the one hand, being fashionable gives benefits to ourselves. It can boost our moods, be respected in some
jobs
or occasions, or can create a new job for some
people
. When we wear the latest
trend
in
fashion
, we feel happy and confident.
Also
,
in
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some
jobs
and occasions, wearing fashionable clothes makes use being well respected
from
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people
and audiences.
In addition
to that,
fashion
creates more opportunities for some
people
digitally. A lot of
jobs
are created in social media,
such
as
fashion
influencers or
fashion
content creators. That’s why
,
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fashion
develops positive effects for our society.
However
, the change of
fashion
trend
seasonally becomes a new problem that not everyone realizes
it
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. Fast
fashion
is one of the contributors
of
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global warming and global pollution.
For instance
, post-
fashion
production in Indonesia is the big three
of
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waste contributors. We do not aware that we need many natural resources to produce a new fabric,
such
as water and plants.
Moreover
, not all
the
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clothes are recyclable, so the waste can
also
pollute and damage
an
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environment. So that, if we cannot control the fast-
fashion
trend
and do not move to do upcycle or recycle of the clothes,
this
will be a major issue of global warming in the upcoming years. To conclude,
although
wearing fashionable staples is important since it can be a self-entertainment, make us well-respected, and can create a new job opportunity,
fashion
has a downside in populating the environment with its fabric waste if we
loose
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the
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control of
fashion
mass production.
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