Government should spend money on medical research and less on researching the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Every year the governments all around the globe lay out a plan for distributing the funds

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different sectors. After all these years, the medical

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still

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the most critical one. While some people argue that

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of spending exorbitant money on environmental issues, the governing bodies should rather emphasize the

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, others quibble from them. I totally agree with the view that researches on the

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should be the

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priority.

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with, the foremost concrete reason for holding onto my view is the

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of lives that will be saved. According to a survey in Asian countries, 70% of people still die because of the unavailability of medical facilities. In countries like India, Pakistan and all the developing nations, the

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needs to be privatized or the facilities should be improved.

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, a disease like Cancer

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prevailing

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a long time needs to be researched. Ostensibly, a cure will be developed and eventually, innumerable lives would be saved. Another key benefit of encouraging scientists and doctors is preparedness. If the regimes promote the medical

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, more people would try to be part of it.

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, in an unprecedented situation like

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emergency, the nation would never be in a shortage of its doctors.

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, every nation would be prepared to face any kind of medical emergency. In conclusion, it is irrefutably true that every nation's well-being is directly linked to the condition of its medical facility.

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country that spends

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amount on its

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facility,

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it leverages it well.