Some people believe that elderly parents ought to live at senior homes. Other believe that they should live with family members. Do you agree or disagree?

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grand parents
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is
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most
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important person in each and every
families
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. They are the guardian of
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grandchildren
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grand children
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undoubtedly.
However
, a fair amount of
people
think that old
fathers
and mothers must
to
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live
at
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old age homes while others believe that they should stay
wiwth
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with
their family members. I strongly agree with
this
statement the senior citizen person should stay with their own family rather than staying at old
people
's
home
.
To begin
with, the senior citizens have a rights to live with their own family because they have
sacrified
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sacrificed
to their entire life for
family
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the family
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such
as earning financial
whe
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when
where
they are young. Their children should look after
to
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their
fathers
and mothers when they are getting sixty age meanwhile the children do not send to old age
home
who their
fathers
.
For example
, Indian
people
should not send
to
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their
fathers
at
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old
people
's
home
because they love
to
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their mothers
therefore
, they always keep at
home
instaed
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instead
of senior homes.
Moreover
,
the
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senior citizens must need love rather than anything when they are elderly. If
a
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elderly man
live
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at
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senior homes, they will feel lonely and stress meanwhile their health might be affected drastically.
Therefore
, the above sixty
man
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men
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would like to stay
with
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at
home
along with their
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grandchild
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grand child
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grandchild
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.
In addition
, they should live their remaining life at their own house with family members because they had worked for long years for their family.
For instance
, according to the survey said that more than 75% of
eldery
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elderly
guy is staying at
home
with
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happily and healthily. To conclude, in
this
modern era, most folks are working parents
therefore
, they do not focus on their senior folks while they prefer to send at rest
home
whereas most
people
would like to keep to their parents at
home
. In my opinion about
this
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the over sixty
guy
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guys
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should live at
home
instead
of rest
home
because they will be happy when they are living at their family members.
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