Some people believe that elderly parents ought to live at senior homes. Other believe that they should live with family members. Do you agree or disagree?
The
grand parents
Correct your spelling
grandparents
is
Change the verb form
are
most
important person in each and every Correct article usage
the most
families
. They are the guardian of Change to a singular noun
family
Correct your spelling
grandchildren
grand children
undoubtedly. Correct your spelling
grandchildren
However
, a fair amount of people
think that old fathers
and mothers must to
live Fix the infinitive
apply
at
old age homes while others believe that they should stay Change preposition
in
wiwth
their family members. I strongly agree with Correct your spelling
with
this
statement the senior citizen person should stay with their own family rather than staying at old people
's home
.
To begin
with, the senior citizens have a rights to live with their own family because they have sacrified
to their entire life for Correct your spelling
sacrificed
family
Add an article
the family
a family
such
as earning financial whe
they are young. Their children should look after Correct your spelling
when
where
to
their Change preposition
apply
fathers
and mothers when they are getting sixty age meanwhile the children do not send to old age home
who their fathers
. For example
, Indian people
should not send to
their Change preposition
apply
fathers
at
old Change preposition
to
people
's home
because they love to
their mothers Change preposition
apply
therefore
, they always keep at home
instaed
of senior homes.
Correct your spelling
instead
Moreover
, the
senior citizens must need love rather than anything when they are elderly. If Correct article usage
apply
a
elderly man Change the article
an
live
Change the verb form
lives
at
senior homes, they will feel lonely and stress meanwhile their health might be affected drastically. Change preposition
in
Therefore
, the above sixty man
would like to stay Change to a plural noun
men
with
at Change preposition
apply
home
along with their Correct your spelling
grandchild
grand child
. Correct your spelling
grandchild
In addition
, they should live their remaining life at their own house with family members because they had worked for long years for their family. For instance
, according to the survey said that more than 75% of eldery
guy is staying at Correct your spelling
elderly
home
with
happily and healthily.
To conclude, in Change preposition
apply
this
modern era, most folks are working parents therefore
, they do not focus on their senior folks while they prefer to send at rest home
whereas most people
would like to keep to their parents at home
. In my opinion about this
the over sixty Add a comma
,this
guy
should live at Change to a plural noun
guys
home
instead
of rest home
because they will be happy when they are living at their family members.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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