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some people claim thatnot enough of the waste from homes is recycled.They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requrienment. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste.

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It is argued that the recycling of home waste is not implemented by
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 to the expected degree.There is a proposal of setting law enforcement to
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 in order to achieve normal results.In my opinion, unless the government does not interfere with it, the community will neglect
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 process continuously. As we know ,
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 spend too much money on households in order to survive them. While they eat much, it means more litters.
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, they purchase bread which is one of their basic needs almost every day.
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 they do not use the whole part of it , they buy more than demanded and ,
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 waste it.
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, it causes air pollution and negative impacts on air quality, as well as, waste of money. It is an alarming trend for government to tackle
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 issue in the appropriate way. There are many ways which can tackle
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, one of the option ways is law regulation. Providing that
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 do not obey
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 without any strict
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, the government needs to figure out
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, they can provide society with special lids which are designed for bread,plastic containers,glasses and so on. If the public who do not follow these
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 and break down the law they will be fined.Another method which can be advisable to educate
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 about the benefits of recycling and how to protect our environment. Due to the fact it affects their budget and prevents them from
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 they will alter their attitudes to recycling. They will get over these problems together and hand them out. In conclusion, taking into account upper mentioned factors , I strongly support those who propose officials have to be involved in tackling
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 attributed to the
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responsibility
 of citizens.
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