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You have been living in a rental apartment for the past three years and had lived peacefully. Recently a new neighbor moved in and he loves to have loud parties every weekend. Write a letter complaining to the landlord. In your letter you should: · explain the situation · describe why it bothers you · suggest a solution

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I am writing with regard to the new neighbour's shift and he likes to have a noisy party every weekend. I have been enjoying living here for the past three years, peacefully, and quietly, and resetting with friendly neighbours who respect the privacy of each resident and know the limits of others.
In addition
 , we live all in happiness and pay all of the rent fees.
However
, a new neighbour has moved in who hosts loud parties every weekend and makes a noise into the night with no respect for people who have to sleep or the kids who have school in the morning.
Furthermore
, the loud parties affect my daily routine.
For instance
, it makes it hard for me to work, sleep and relax. Despite
this
, I have talked with him several times, but unfortunately, he makes promises he does not fulfil to make the sound a bit lower and to end the parties earlier. Even though I back to ask him again and again he refuses all my requests. Respectfully, you can interfere in
this
 conflict and warn him about his lousy attitude since he is disturbing the entire building and neighbours. In that case, it will make other residents consider moving to another quiet place. I expect to hear from you as soon as you have received my letter
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph contains a single, focused idea to improve clarity.
complete response
While the letter clearly describes the situation, you may include more specific details or examples to strengthen your case.
logical structure
The letter opens with a clear explanation of the situation and describes why it is bothersome effectively.
suitable writing tone
The tone is polite and suitable for a complaint letter.
greeting and closing
The letter has a clear greeting and closing, which makes it well-structured and easy to read.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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