You work in an office and have recently been experiencing a health problem. You think that the problem started because of the working conditions in the office. Write a letter to your manager.In your letter: describe the health problem explain why you think it was caused by conditions in the office suggest what the manager should do to improve the working conditions in the office

Dear Mr Sharma, I am writing to express my concern about the quality of drinking
water
in our office and suggest changing the vendor who delivers
water
bottles in the office premises. In the
last
1 month, many employees including me were admitted to the hospital due to typhoid disease. Our family members did not encounter
this
problem
hence
I assume that it is because of the
water
that we drink in our company.
This
has
also
impacted the timelines of our projects due to the unavailability of ill teammates
thus
this
matter needs serious attention. After discussion with other colleagues, we came to a conclusion that the
water
supplier needs to be replaced with a new one and
water
should be tested at regular intervals to ensure the safety and health of the employees in our organization. Kindly let me know if you need medical reports or more details to handle
this
situation efficiently. I hope you will investigate
this
matter and take prompt action on the same. Yours sincerely, Jasmine Kaur
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