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People living in large cities face several problems. What are these problems? Should governments encourage them to move to smaller towns?

#people #cities #face #governments #move #towns
In today's
world
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 most of the citizens are struggling with some of the negative aspects of
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he
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 urban lifestyle. Some of them are related to the economic situation of the
cities
 and others are related to
cities
 development.
However
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 personally I believe that there are several ways to move
people
 to other
cities
. There are some factors that have a direct effect on the living condition.
First
 and foremost high cost of living in big towns are significant high. job opportunity
are
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 strongly decreased and due to the increasing demands of the society for
work
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 they will be limited more and more, which lead
people
 to the hard economic situation.
Moreover
, some of the issues
comes
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 from
traffic
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the traffic
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 of the metropolises. there is a direct correlation between the amount of
the
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traffic and mental diseases. Many time
are
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 wasted due to the traffic congestion and so much mental and physical brought for citizens. As result, many of them suffered from some illnesses
such
 as heart attacks. But there are some practical ways which governments can carry out
for
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 solve the problem and move them to other
cities
. If some of the opportunities and facilities are improved in smaller
cities
, many
people
 leave the
larg
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large
 downtown. It means that
,
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government
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the government
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 must provide some works and jobs for
people
 because of a lack of enough works many of the
people
 tend to immigrate to larger
cities
.
Moreover
, some big organisation must be moved to other
cities
. It means that, whenever we gathered around all of the important organisations of the country, the importance of the other
cities
 are down, which can provide poverty and less attention. In many countries, capital
cities
 are
most
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 important
city
 in all over the country. So it is
obviously
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, government pay attention to the
city
 and increases the value of that
such
 as
city
 cleanness and
city
 structure improvements. At
all
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 there are many difficulties for the citizens in the large
cities
 which can be reduced by some beneficial approaches from the government.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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