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Some people believe that smart phones are destroying social interaction today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #phones #interaction
In the rapidly changing world,
the
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mobile
phones
 have become an inevitable part of daily routine. While some
people
 argue that the usage of these mobile
phones
have
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 deprecated the interactions between family and friends.
However
, others quibble from them. Even though
,
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 mobile
phones
 are connecting distant
people
, but I somewhat agree that
the
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smart
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phones
 continue to disturb
the
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social gatherings,
To begin
 with, the foremost concrete reason to behold these electronic devices the full responsibility is the effect
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it on juveniles. Lately,
the
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teenagers avoid family gatherings because they enjoy spending time playing games on mobiles
phones
 or scrolling through their social media channels.
Consequently
, these children hardly dwell with their families and often, they are spotted lonely.
Secondly
, the comfort of connecting with friends and family over telephones and video calls have dwindled family get-togethers. To illustrate
this
 point, according to a survey conducted in Manchester, the frequency for
most
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 family gathering were twice a week earlier. But it has gone down to once a month.
On the other hand
, like every truth has two sides, so does
smart
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phones
.
The mobile
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phones
 have
also
 enabled
people
 to interact with complete strangers. The adolescents and the younger men have expanded their circles. An innumerable
people
 have started to meet
people
 outside of their comfort zone and eventually, they have bonded well.
Moreover
, it has
also
 become handy to plan for meeting with acquaintances. In conclusion, the evolution of
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smart
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phones
 and the internet have sure made life lonely.
Nevertheless
, mobiles have
also
 connected with
people
 that were never possible earlier.
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