Some people say traditional celebrations are getting less popular. What are the causes of this, and how can we make them become popular again?

It is undoubtedly true that modern activities are going to rival traditional

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. It is believed by some that a myriad of traditional

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losing their popularity at an alarming rate. In

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essay, I am going to discuss some of the reasons why traditional festivals are becoming less attractive for some

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and how to tackle

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matter. One of the main reasons

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the problem is

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of attention from the

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. It is often said that the

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tends to promote international

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as a magnet to attract foreign tourists rather than traditional

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. A standout example of

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is the Sea Games event in 2011 when the Indonesian

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was elected as the host. In fact, it spent billion

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for exorbitant advertisements and a plethora of

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facilities renovation which are considered vital to

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the event successful.

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, despite celebrating traditional

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in their neighbourhood,

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would be more attracted to attend global

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which are more appealing. To tackle

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issue, the

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should give equal attention to local and international

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which could make

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enticed to come and enjoy cultural

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. Unless the

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spends a fair amount of expenditure on both

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, the traditional ones would eventually disappear and be forgotten by local

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cause of the problem is the massive development of a city. By and large, the

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has established a myriad of leisure amenities

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enables

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, particularly adolescents, as an exciting place to let their hair down on a typical weekend. A standout example of

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is Disneyland, where both domestic and foreign

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spend their free time with their families and friends to explore and seek new experiences.

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, more and more

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would prefer to visit modern recreational places than traditional carnivals. The way forward could be parents as their inner circle should educate millennials about the importance of local

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which aim to protect the culture’s heritage. To sum up, the decline in popularity of traditional

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has become increasingly prevalent nowadays due to the

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’s policy and substantial expansion.

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is a serious problem, and allocating more budget to traditional

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as well as providing education to children

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essential to

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issue,

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, our ancestors’ traditions would no longer exist in the future. In my view, the main responsibility to combat

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cultural issue lies with the

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and parents.