Some people believe that it is better to spend more money to eliminate the cause of crime, while others think that government should spend more on punishment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The regime must work for the reduction of criminal cases by imposing strict law, which provides security to individuals.
On the other hand
, Individual think spending a large amount of fund on education or correction centres will help to reduce misconduct in the nations but there are few individuals who believe that they use Linking Words
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capital to punish the criminals. Linking Words
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essay will be discussing me both views with supporting arguments in the below paragraphs.
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reason is that the authority should try to provide the basic requirement of an individual, Linking Words
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as food,shelter, and wage, which is needed to buy survival things. Linking Words
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would only be possible by creating more employment opportunity. So, the government should start a new scheme by imposing a large amount, which severe the society and gives better future them. Linking Words
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, the authority must start programs that provide free education to the general public. Linking Words
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, it creates a positive atmosphere in the nation.
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On the other hand
, there are some people who regard that money would be spent on the punishment given to the person who attempted an offensive task. They start some educational activity which guides them to follow the right path. Even they Linking Words
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teach them technique and some art of living which leads to a better future for them. They can push them to do work while in prison so that money can be earned which they can keep once released from jail. Linking Words
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, Research conducted shows 80% of people can be diverted on the correct path by consulting positively.
In conclusion, the government must have to work for the safety of the nation. In my opinion, Linking Words
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can be achieved by only spending a large amount of capital on the reduction of crime by providing consultation or free education to everyone.Linking Words
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