Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer Write letter to Mrs Barrett in your letter Suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I hope

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letter finds you well, recently I have seen your advertisement in the local newspaper for household work, I am very much interested in the position as I have similar experience and I would like to provide my assistance. Currently, I am a part-time student pursuing a caregiver course and previously I worked for an older couple by helping them with gardening, cleaning, and a little cooking.

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, I am very much interested in cleaning and helping senior citizens.

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, I can gain skills and knowledge for my current field of study. I can

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accompany you for morning walks. I am available Monday to Saturday from 8 AM to 3 pm. as In the evenings I will be having summer classes to attend I can start

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job on the required dates as mentioned in the advertisement, Apart from that I live

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your location which takes only 15min to travel from local transport. I hope positive response from you. Yours Faithfully, Bryan Johnson.

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coherence and cohesion

Consider varying your sentence structures and using more linking words to enhance flow between ideas.

task achievement

Make sure to respond directly to each part of the task, particularly in explaining why you want the job.

task achievement

The letter addresses the key components of the task and expresses interest in the position clearly.

task achievement

Your experience and availability are communicated well, providing the necessary information concisely.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

170 words

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Domestic chores
Culinary skills
Horticulture
Cultural immersion
Work ethic
Flexible schedule
Time management
Prior commitments
Punctuality
Reliability

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