Having more money and less time is better than earning less money and having more free time. do you agree

Some family believe that wealth should be more and idle
time
should be less and think it opposes. I do not agree with
this
statement. In my opinion, enough cash and more
time
can lead to happiness.
To begin
with, many
folk
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prefer fund over
time
. They think that
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they can become happy with the
money
. Well, it is true that with
money
a person can buy a luxurious lifestyle
such
as
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expensive car, a bungalow, and so on.
However
,
people
cannot buy happiness and healthy relation with family.
For instance
, In a survey, it was found that
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wealthy
people
are more suffer from relationship problems. Their families are not happy with their
money
.
On the other hand
, others believe that idle
time
is necessary for an individual rather than a huge amount of
money
.
People
who spend less
time
working and more
time
with family are happier
people
.
For instance
, in a survey, it was found that
people
who give more
time
to their families are happier and healthier. It was
also
found that
people
who are not run behind
money
have fewer divorce chances.
In other words
, we can say
people
's relation with a loved one is healthier. Sometimes they have to suffer from financial problems but they can tackle them with intelligence. To conclude, In my opinion, from above mentioned it is found that
people
with more idle
time
and less
money
are happy as compared to others.
People
can buy a luxurious lifestyle but they cannot buy happy life and healthy relation with family.
Submitted by Rajwinder Kaur on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial security
  • facilitating
  • lifestyle
  • professional development
  • increased stress
  • work-life balance
  • hobbies
  • quality time
  • physical and mental health
  • financial constraints
  • luxury items
  • overall well-being
  • personal growth
  • middle ground
  • sacrificing
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