A company offers a temporary job with no salary, but it helps you to gain some work experience. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, -introduce your previous work experience -tell the manager which department you want to work -describe what expectation you have from the job
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to your offer about a temporary job what you sent me yesterday. The first of all I would like to say that it is a good chance for me to work in your
company
. It does not mater that ther is no salery. So for me It is jast important to gain some work experience specialy in your company
. I have not eny experiences because I have graduated my university this
year and get a master degree of economic managmant . I agree with your sugestion for a job as a manager assistent.
If I will be honist It will be huge apportunity for me to become mamber of your company
staff . So I want to tell you taht I have some expectetion from your company
as your organization is one of the the most trading company
in our country that is
why during my practice I could gain a lot of new and usefull skills.
Your Faithfully
ZohrabSubmitted by zohrab-gevorgyan on
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coherence cohesion
Focus on organizing your ideas more logically and clearly. Each paragraph should have a single, clear idea. While introducing yourself and your experiences, ensure this section is separate and clear from your expectations from the job.
coherence cohesion
Add a formal greeting and a closing statement to make your letter feel more complete and professional. While 'Dear Sir/Madam' is a good start, consider adding 'Yours sincerely' or 'Yours faithfully' followed by your name at the end
task achievement
To fully address the task, ensure you cover all aspects of the prompt. This includes elaborating on your past experiences, stating your desired department clearly, and outlining your expectations from the job in a detailed manner.
task achievement
Adopt a more formal and polished writing tone by avoiding informal phrases and correcting spelling and grammar mistakes. This will make your letter more professional and suitable for a job application.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.