CHILDREN SHOULD ALWAYS FOLLOW THEIR PARENTS’ ADVICE. TO WHAT EXTEND DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT?

There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether obeying all parent's suggestions is better than following

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original plan. It seems to me that leaving youngster in their own idea is the best opportunity for them and I will explain why in

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essay. Three main reasons support my statement about

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problem. The primary factor we need to take into consideration is that every people have their own way, including the young generations.

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is because they are the

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the most. In

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, they undoubtedly expert with their strength and weakness. The

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reason for my belief is that every decision is precious for the future. Delivering their idea about what they desire to learn in university, as an example, will lead them to the major differences as if they hold pressure from

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leads to a fact that parent

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to respect their child opinion. The other

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reason is the effect which can be caused

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giving youngster choices. It is

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that after a teen produces an idea, it could

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confidences, which is absolutely important, especially when they have

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pursuing their dream. Looking from another perspective, it might be said that the differences of experience that older have

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important to be considered as well. From their past mistakes,

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learner could avoid facing the same result.

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, I believe that every journey which people make is a diamond for their continuity of life. In conclusion,

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youngster in terms of deciding their own life is more crucial because it strongly relates

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how they aware

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, their

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improvement. In light of the above factors, I firmly believe that young people should not always follow the order from their parents if they found it does not match with their thought.