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In the future, it seems it will be more difficult to live on the earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as Mars. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

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The given table compares the estimated
oil
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production
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 from six middle east countries that are measured in millions of
barrels
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 per
day
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 from 1990 to 2010.Overall, it can be seen that the
oil
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production
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 capacity was increased during the given period but the most significant changes happened in Saudi Arabia. In 1990, Saudi Arabia produced just over eight millions
oil
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barrels
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 per
day
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.
Then
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, the
production
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 gradually went up and there were approximately 9
million
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oil
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barrels
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 per
day
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 in 2000. Five years later,
oil
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production
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 was still growing and it was about 13
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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. At the end of the given period, it hit the peak of just above 14
million
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barrels
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 in everyday
production
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.
Oil
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production
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 in Qatar was the lowest among the six countries as they produced nearly 1
million
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 per
day
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although
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 there was a modest increase in 2000. The
production
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 in Iran was about 3
million
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 in 1990 and it reached well above the 4
million
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barrels
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 in 2010.
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 in Iraq, Kuwait and UAE,
oil
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production
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 capacity was approximately 2
million
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 and gradually rose to 4
million
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 of
production
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 capacity per
day
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 in 2010.
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