Write about the following topic. In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In some countries ,
people
intend to have their own houses instead
of living in the rented homes . In my view , this
idea would be as merit . In the following essay , the reason for being essential to have the owned house and why it is a positive point will be discussed .
Increasing tranquillity and welfare is the power full of people
determination cause to purchase owned accommodation to live. Moreover
, public
and their house have some financial needs apparently the most necessary and heaviest expense is paying money to provide a home. Correct article usage
the public
Also
, if people
do not have apartments , they will have to expend a considerable part of their incomes on renting home
. Correct article usage
a home
Furthermore
, providing other needs would be difficult . For instance
, a child who lives in a place which his parents are ownership will have opportunity
to reach Correct article usage
the opportunity
more
desirable education by studying in better schools and uses the rich nutrients as his meals rather than a child who accommodates in a rental flat because a segment of his parents' salaries spend on hiring so services quality for Correct article usage
a more
this
child will be declined . Therefore
, families can not achieve the
reasonable welfare unless they are Correct article usage
apply
their houses ownership
.
Change to a genitive case
the ownership of their house
the ownership of their houses
Additionally
, having a positive view about owning a home is more beneficial than renting would be the fact that generally , public
who hire apartment should change their living or region places every year because of hiring nature that will be boring and exhausting for them and their families .So , they are not satisfied with their situations . Add an article
the public
a public
For example
, people
devices or tools are hurt or their space can not be designed according to their favourite as the result of staying in the hires rooms. Consequently
, relocating homes regularly by renters reduces their satisfaction of condition
.
In conclusion , in my view , buying a house has a positive influence on public life because the more owned homes Add an article
a condition
the condition
people
have , the more satisfaction and tranquillity will be observed in families
life .Add an article
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