A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your company. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/ her Explain how to apply for the job
Dear Praneeth,
I am happy to hear from you, I am all right and I hope you are doing well too. I am writing
this
letter to let you know that I found a job which matches your skill set. The role is titled 'Business Intelligence Developer' at the Intuit corporation.
The responsibilities include building dashboards using Tableau, analysing bugs and transforming data tables using Alteryx. I am convinced that this
is a great opportunity for you as you've completed your master's in Computer Science.
Furthermore
, you can find this
position online using the websites Indeed, LinkedIn, Angel List and also
through a recruiter. Although
most of the companies need their employees to relocate, this
one has an option to work from home which is a huge advantage in your case.
I hope this
information is helpful and please reach out to me with any further
questions.
All the best!
Sheba.Submitted by praneeth2094 on
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greeting and closing
Consider providing a more personalized closing that reflects the warmth of your relationship to enhance the tone of the letter.
logical structure
You could use paragraphing more effectively to clearly delineate between different points, such as separating the job details, why it suits the friend, and the application process.
complete response
Adding more specifics about why the job suits your friend, beyond the matching qualification, such as personality traits or past work experiences that make him a great fit, could improve the task response.
task achievement
You've done a great job in detailing the job role and its requirements, which aligns well with informing your friend about the opportunity.
task achievement
The inclusion of specific tools and responsibilities in the job was a good touch.
suitable writing tone
Your letter has a nice, friendly tone, suitable for writing to a friend, while also being informative.