Write a letter to the restaurant manager to organise a party. Why you want to throw the party What special arrangements you will need Any relevant questions
Hello sir
Hope
this
letter finds you in good health.I would
Verb problem
am
write
Wrong verb form
writing
this
letter with great excitement to organise a party in your esteemed restaurant. The party will be held on 15th June at
the evening.
Change preposition
in
This
event is quite special for me and my parents because it's their 25th marriage anniversary that day and I planing
to celebrate it with close friends and family. Only small Verb problem
plan
gathering
of 15-20 people occur so you will arrange Fix the agreement mistake
gatherings
accordingly
. We want a
area Change the article
an
of
sitting and for standing as well.
There are some dance performances we are preparedChange preposition
for
, so
we want Change preposition
for, so
a suitable stage arrangements
for Correct the article-noun agreement
a suitable stage arrangement
suitable stage arrangements
this
. Could you please arrange a double layer anniversary cake without including any egg because my mom is pure
vegetarianCorrect article usage
a pure
.
Change the punctuation
?
Also
, I need a project and speakers to present a short film.
Moreover
, I would ask you for refreshments that you will provide. Can you please send me your menu so that we decide to choose according to
the guest
preferencesChange noun form
guest's
.
Looking forward to your positive response.
Yours sincerely
AmanpreetChange the punctuation
?
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coherence cohesion
Make sure to clearly separate different ideas into individual paragraphs to improve readability.
coherence cohesion
It's good to specify dates and events, but make sure all points are clearly linked to the main purpose of the letter.
task achievement
You described why the party is special effectively.
task achievement
You specified your requirements clearly and asked relevant questions.