Write a letter to the restaurant manager to organise a party. Why you want to throw the party What special arrangements you will need Any relevant questions

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Hello sir Hope

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letter finds you in good health.I

would

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write

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this

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letter with great excitement to organise a party in your esteemed restaurant. The party will be held on 15th June

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the evening.

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event is quite special for me and my parents because it's their 25th marriage anniversary that day and I

planing

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to celebrate it with close friends and family. Only small

gathering

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of 15-20 people occur so you will arrange

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. We want

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area

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sitting and for standing as well. There are some dance performances we are prepared

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we want

a suitable stage arrangements

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a suitable stage arrangement

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for

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. Could you please arrange a double layer anniversary cake without including any egg because my mom is

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vegetarian

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, I need a project and speakers to present a short film.

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, I would ask you for refreshments that you will provide. Can you please send me your menu so that we decide to choose

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preferences

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Looking forward to your positive response. Yours sincerely Amanpreet

Submitted by 1402randhawapreet on Fri May 31 2024

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coherence cohesion

Make sure to clearly separate different ideas into individual paragraphs to improve readability.

coherence cohesion

It's good to specify dates and events, but make sure all points are clearly linked to the main purpose of the letter.

task achievement

You described why the party is special effectively.

task achievement

You specified your requirements clearly and asked relevant questions.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

174 words

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