In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

While there are apparent enormous

benefits

of imposing tariffs on personal vehicle owners to improvise the public transport.

However

, there are significant discernible

drawbacks

such

as penalizing a certain sector to promote alternatives and prevent lower and middle-income grade people to have possession of a personal vehicle. My opinion is that it is advisable to increase taxes for the benefit of reducing traffic congestion and pollution. Explicated below are my assertions and the basis of my belief.

To begin

with, prominent

benefits

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better traffic management, reduced pollution leading to a promising future and

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better urban road management. To illustrate

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, as per a recently published report by

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of road and safety, less than half of daily commuters prefers to travel by private cars despite the availability of public transportation.

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, increased taxes on personal cars would

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the usage of other commutation options

such

as metros, buses and

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more help in reducing pressure on the transportation system.

On the contrary

, notable and perceptible disadvantages are preventing a certain sector of the society from owning a vehicle whereas the rich and affluent people can continue with their existing lifestyle. Notwithstanding the fact that the aforementioned

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benefits

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are challenges are worth pondering about.

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, to tackle the issues of pollution and road safety strong measures are required. In conclusion, having elucidated

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benefits

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issue and having anecdotal evidence supporting my assertions. It is

also

recommended that the potential of technology and human innovation must be harnessed to maximise the

benefits

and diminish the

drawbacks

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society at large.