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some people think that humans can use animals in any way for their own benefits. others, however, believe that people should not use animals in the wrong way. discuss both this views and give your own opinion.

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It is argued that
animals
 are used by humans beings for their own advantages while others reject that and believe that they should not be treated in
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bad manner. In my view,
animals
 are
also
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beautiful creature of God. People should respect their emotions and must not be used for their own sake.
To begin
 with,
animals
 are
the
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part of the life cycle they
also
 have emotions and feelings which should not be abused. A number of
animals
 are used for research purposes. These
animals
 are treated with strong chemicals and have gone through pain as the scientists are trying to discover a more effective treatment for the patients who are suffering from harmful diseases
such
 as cancer, covid-19. They use various
animals
 like rabbits, rats and monkey as they have similar respiration as human beings.
Furthermore
, there are a number of bloody sports like cockfighting, dogfighting which are organized every year for enjoyment, while fighting they harm each other so badly that they died on spot.
Therefore
, the government should keep an eye on the organization that organized
such
 kind of events and should be punished with a heavy fine or imprisonment.
On the other hand
, in the past cows and buffaloes are used in farming for irrigation which is really useful for the farmers to get the proper yield and can earn profits.
Hence
, there was a mutual benefit as for the farmer they are the only source of farming and they take care of their
animals
. Even nowadays a number of people use
animals
 for agricultural purposes as they are lack other infrastructure , to get dairy products. So they spend an enormous amount to keep them fit and healthy.
In
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 recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to the conclusion that the human can use
animals
 in a proper manner and should not be abused when they are at the
last
 stage of their life.
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