Living in large cities today's poses many problems for people. What are these problems? Should governments encourage more people to live in a smaller town.

These days a vast number of difficulties have been undergone by city dwellers living in big urban, which are comprised of population density, air pollution, and increasing violation rate. So,

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should adopt a new approach to ease these problems. The origin of

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situation seems to stem from three factors.

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, overcrowding issue,

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, a wide range of amenities and facilities

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as modern health_care systems, International airport, and so on, are merely existed in certain areas, which caused many individuals to move out and settle in well-equipped places to improve their quality of life. As

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can lead to heavy congestion on the metropolises.

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, because of the fact that there are lots of job vacancies have offered in large urban.

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, so many people have been attracted by these privileges, which caused extreme traffic congestion and air pollution through both the fumes of cars and

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public transportation

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, facing a new trend in the crime rate.  Owning to the fact that the cost of living in mega_cities are quite high nearly most

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individuals go through a lot of difficulties to make their ends meet.

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, having been some injustice in the society, they couldn't make a decent living out of their job.

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, they are likely to commit a crime to meet their needs, which is catastrophic. Some fundamental steps can be taken by governments to tackle these problems, which consists of, enhancing people welfare in these deprived zones.

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, by providing more occupation opportunities for folk, who are living in

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kind of sectors through offering financial incentives

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as tax rebates for companies that establish their factories in the suburbs or on the outskirts of the cities. On

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, by accommodating their needs in terms of having state-of-the-art facilities like swimming pool, shopping centre, and so on. In collusion, some problems of living in huge urban cities might be faced, by urban dwellers are overcrowding, air pollution, and increasing crime rate which can be solved by running some companies in the suburbs and creating some recreational centres