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Some people believe that entertainers are paid too much and their impact on society is negative, while others disagree and believe that they deserve the money they make because of their positive effect on others. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, everyone works for
money
 to fulfil their needs. Some individuals opine that entertainers earn too much
money
 and that has a negative influence on society.
However
, others believe that performers deserve
this
 due to their positive impact on the community.
This
 assignment intends to discuss both perspectives and describe my own opinion.
To begin
 with, the entertainer industry is a billion-dollar industry. Everyone loves to watch movies, sports and other artistic performance. Celebrity popularity makes them a star and able to earn millions of dollars.
However
, some
celebrities
 become
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brand ambassador for drinking and smoking company. Many teenagers and youngster follow them. They do what the artist has done on the screen. Some elderly people have problem with
this
 because children try to copy them in real
life
 that effect on their
life
.
Furthermore
, some
celebrities
 do show off their
money
. Young adults get distracted from their
life
. They try to become rich like them and choose a shortcut which creates trouble in their
life
.
On the other hand
, some individuals take it as a positive side to pay too much
money
 to
celebrities
 because they do so much charity work for society.
For example
, in Indian, from film industries to sportsperson, everyone has their NGO's and support other community works. They spend many of their earnings on welfare.
Moreover
, they did a lot of hard work for themself and for their country.
For instance
, the Indian cricket team wins a lot of matches. In 2011, they
also
 won the world cup tournament but we could never neglect their hard work. Their dedication and determination to win every match are unmatchable. To conclude, in my perspective, both views have strong points to support their statement. Every person has both the quality good and bad. Many
celebrities
 help needy people. They run many programs to support society but we could never neglect their negative side.
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