Governments in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on food and beverages with high levels of sugar. Some think that these taxes are a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Consuming

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in large quantity is, indubitably, dangerous for one;

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, is the imposition of special duty by the rulers on eatables and drinks rich in

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a prudent step?

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some presume it develops healthy eating habits among the citizens, I oppose it since not only will those

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to

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continue buying it, but the various industries will face financial stress as well. A school of thought insists that

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tax policy will result in healthy citizens.

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them, the

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prices of items rich in

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will discourage the public from adding

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high-calorie items

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their diets, thereby, keeping masses away from health complications,

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as obesity and diabetes. Contrarily, there will be no effect on people’s eating choices. Most people earn to satiate their taste buds, and because the sugary items will still remain affordable for them after a few percentage increases in price

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taxes, the efforts of making people healthy will go in vain.

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, despite Dairy milk chocolate’s price tripled in the

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decade, its sales have kept rising.

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failing to achieve its target, the decision will adversely affect other types of businesses. As the food becomes exorbitantly expensive for people, their spending capacity will shrink, which will lead to fewer sales of various other manufacturers or service providers. To exemplify, a study has revealed that had the cost of food not skyrocketed, more Indians could have afforded a better vehicle for them in the

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year. Resultantly, the decision

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the price of food may ultimately propel other companies to either shut down or emigrate. In conclusion, the belief that extra taxes on

sugar

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will reduce its consumption is flawed.

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, it will diminish the revenues of other sectors;

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, it is an unwise step by many governments, and more research is needed to unearth better ways of tackling the issue of high

sugar

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consumption.