pople who cause their own illnesses through unhealthy lifestyles and poor diets should have to pay more for health care. To extent do you agree or disagree. Give your opinion.
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an unhealthy
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illnesses
Such
as heart problems, obesity and so on. However
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health
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On the other hand
, there are two main reasons why people
have to pay for their health
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just watching t.v. and playing video games, because of this
they welcome unusual health
problem. Namely, obesity, diabetes and heart problems. Therefore
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