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some people think that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career ,while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. discuss both views

#people #university #college #route #career #job #school
CONTROVERSY EXISTS WHETHER A SUCCESSFUL CAREER IS EARNED WHEN
ONE
 PURSUE A TERTIARY
EDUCATION
 LEVEL OR WHEN
ONE
 FIND A JOB RIGHT AFTER SECONDARY
EDUCATION
 COMPLETION. IN
THIS
 ESSAY, I WILL DISCUSS THE GIVEN PERSPECTIVE AND EXPLAIN WHY I SUPPORT THE FORMER VIEW. ON THE
ONE
 HAND, THERE ARE SALIENT REASONS WHY FACTIONS ADVOCATE AFTER SCHOOL EMPLOYMENT FAVORABLE.
FIRSTLY
, THE EARLIEST A
PERSON
 IS EMPLOYED, THE MORE
EXPERIENCE
 THAT
PERSON
 ACQUIRE. AND THE MORE JOB-RELATED
EXPERIENCE
 AN EMPLOYEE HAVE THE MORE MARKETABLE AN
ONE
 BECOMES TO PROSPECTIVE EMPLOYERS.
AS A RESULT
,
THIS
 GIVES A
PERSON
 AN ADVANTAGE OVER THOSE WHO WILL HAVE TO COMPLETE A DEGREE FOR FOUR TO FIVE MORE YEARS.
SECONDLY
,
THIS
 INITIATIVE WOULD ALLOW THE STUDENT A TIME TO INTROSPECT HIS MOST DESIRED COURSE. TO EXEMPLIFY, I WORKED FOR A YEAR, AFTER GRADUATING
IN
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 HIGH SCHOOL AS A MARKETING ASSISTANT, BEFORE I CAME TO CONCLUDE THAT MY SKILLS AND PERSONALITY WERE NOT CARVED FOR BUSINESS-RELATED JOBS, AND SO IN COLLEGE, I ENROLLED AND ENJOYED MY NURSING STUDENTS YEARS BEFORE I BECAME A SUCCESSFUL NURSE.
ON THE OTHER HAND
, TERTIARY
EDUCATION
 COMPLETION IS UNDERSCORED BY SOME AS THE ULTIMATE KEY TO HAVING JOB PROSPECTS AND EVENTUAL HIGHER SOCIAL MOBILITY FOR SEVERAL REASONS. THE MOST PREDOMINANT
ONE
 IS THAT UNIVERSITY
EDUCATION
 DICTATES WHO ARE THE APPROPRIATE ONES WHO SHOULD GET EMPLOYMENT IN WHICH INDUSTRY.
THIS
 MEANS THAT
,
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 THE HIGHER EDUCATIONAL ATTAINMENT A
PERSON
 HAS, THE HIGHER IS HER CHANCE TO BE IN A REALM OF HIGH PAYING JOBS.
FOR INSTANCE
, MEDICAL COURSES AND LAW STUDIES REQUIRE 8 TO YEARS OF TERTIARY SAPIENCY,
THUS
 THEY ARE ONES WHO GET TO HAVE THE LION'S SHARE IN TERMS OF PAYMENT AS OPPOSE TO THOSE WHO ONLY COMPLETED 3 TO 4 BACCALAUREATE DEGREE. WHAT IS MORE, IN TODAY'S COMPETITIVE WORLD, HAVING MANY
EXPERIENCE
 IS NO LONGER ENOUGH.
INSTEAD
, A HIGHER LEVEL OF ERUDITION MATTERS. GONE ARE THE DAYS WHEN A
PERSON
 CAN BECOME A PRACTITIONER NURSE AFTER WORKING IN A HEALTH INSTITUTION FOR A DECADE OR LESS.
INSTEAD
, A DIPLOMA IS REQUIRED WHICH SERVES AS AN EVIDENCE THAT A SET OF SKILL IS EARNED THEORETICALLY AND PRACTICALLY. TO CONCLUDE, IN MY OPINION, A HIGHER
EDUCATION
 IS THE BEST WAY TO ASCEND
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 THE ECONOMIC LADDER AS WE ARE NOW LIVING IN A VERY COMPETITIVE WORLD AND WHERE
EXPERIENCE
 IS NO LONGER SUFFICIENT.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Academic qualifications
  • Specialized skills
  • In-depth knowledge
  • Personal growth
  • Social development
  • Practical experience
  • Financial independence
  • Career progression
  • Professional networking
  • Education
  • Work experience
  • Successful career
  • Personal interests
  • Career goals
  • Decision-making process
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