Some people believe that watching TV and playing computer games should be limited and substituted by reading books. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

Computer
and
TV
have already become
ubiquitous
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part of our life.It
is sometimes argue
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that these technologies should be restricted and replaced by reading
books
.Personally,I completely
agree
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this
point of view. On the one hand,utilizing
computer
and
TV
is attractive for several reasons.
First
and
foremost
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computer
has several useful software programmes,so they make our life easier.
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is
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because, individuals can use these programmes
creating
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folders,writing reports,copying documents to name but a few.
Secondly
,
TV
shows and
movies
are both
entertainment
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and help
people
reduce their stress.
For instance
,many
people
work hard all
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day and during that time they might face some problems.
Then
,they come to their home with stress.In
this
case,watching comedies and
movies
aid them
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their battery along with
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mood.
On the other hand
,I believe that those devices should be limited.A salient example of
this
spending
shuur
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short
amount of time on the
computer
as well as
TV
may cause inevitable problems.To elucidate,if children play games too much time on the
computer
,their eyes will injure.
Hence
,they should wear glasses.
In other words
, nowadays there are some inappropriate
movies
and shows
can
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be seen on
TV
.If young
people
watch these
movies
,
this
may not only spoil their
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but
also
led to them doing the same actions.
Last
but not least,those technologies are not more useful than reading
books
.Owing to the fact that,without reading
books
and having
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deal of knowledge scientists would not have been able to create these things. In summary,
although
computer
and
TV
can sometimes have a positive effect on
the
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people
,I would argue that they should be limited and more focus should be given
for
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reading
books
.
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