Some people believe that watching TV and playing computer games should be limited and substituted by reading books. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

Computer

and

TV

have already become

ubiquitous

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part of our life.It

is sometimes argue

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that these technologies should be restricted and replaced by reading

books

.Personally,I completely

agree

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this

point of view. On the one hand,utilizing

computer

and

TV

is attractive for several reasons.

First

and

foremost

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computer

has several useful software programmes,so they make our life easier.

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is

simpy

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because, individuals can use these programmes

creating

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folders,writing reports,copying documents to name but a few.

Secondly

,

TV

shows and

movies

are both

entertainment

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and help

people

reduce their stress.

For instance

,many

people

work hard all

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day and during that time they might face some problems.

Then

,they come to their home with stress.In

this

case,watching comedies and

movies

aid them

recharge

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their battery along with

good

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mood.

On the other hand

,I believe that those devices should be limited.A salient example of

this

spending

shuur

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short

amount of time on the

computer

as well as

TV

may cause inevitable problems.To elucidate,if children play games too much time on the

computer

,their eyes will injure.

Hence

,they should wear glasses.

In other words

, nowadays there are some inappropriate

movies

and shows

can

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be seen on

TV

.If young

people

watch these

movies

,

this

may not only spoil their

behavior

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but

also

led to them doing the same actions.

Last

but not least,those technologies are not more useful than reading

books

.Owing to the fact that,without reading

books

and having

great

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deal of knowledge scientists would not have been able to create these things. In summary,

although

computer

and

TV

can sometimes have a positive effect on

the

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people

,I would argue that they should be limited and more focus should be given

for

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reading

books

.