Logging rainforest has serious problems on animals and humans. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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contemporary era, one of the major and controversial questions of the day is that erosion has a very dangerous effect on humans and living things. I fully agree that desertification can wreak havoc on the livelihoods of humans and other living things and, its devastating effects is discussed in the following article.

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, dense shrubs and deciduous fruit and leafy saplings are enhancing the beauty of many of the world's vineyards by creating a unique identity in the surrounding.

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, increasing urban business requires a lot of fuel for the power to be used, due to which forest are being cut down for logging, along with desertification.

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, plants and seedlings use carbon dioxide for photosynthesis, and their harvesting increases the release of harmful gases in the atmosphere and leads to many diseases.

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few decades, erosion in India has upset the entire natural harmony with the polluted climate, with many new respiratory diseases taking over, with asthma being the most prominent form.

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, woodlands are a major source of rainfall which is effective in maintaining the ecosystem.

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keeps the climate in check through the unique gift as a blessing of nature, providing a living temperature for humanity and all living beings.

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, desertification destroys it continues to grow, the consonance of the weather will fluctuate greatly.

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, statistical surveillance in the Amazon rainforest in the United States has seen a 45 per cent decrease in rainfall over the past 10 years, mainly due to logging.

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, many other natural disasters have been observed,

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as droughts, floods and lack of fertility in the land.

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, we need to prevent logging in order to maintain the mellifluence of the habitat in order to cope with the various difficult situations that could endanger humanity and our lives. For

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purpose, the government should

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administer different kinds of strict laws, so that the climate remains clean and balanced and humanity is preserved.

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