Many governments are investing less in roads and more in public transport systems. Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage?

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In today's world, governments are investing more money in order to develop more public
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rather than building roads. Both means of
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are equally important in modern society but, I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. I will explain my reasoning in
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essay. Nowadays, people choose to have their own means of
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which is harmful to the environment. I think if we use other ways of travelling
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as train, buses to go to work or nearby place, it would reduce environmental pollution.
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, it will reduce traffic on the roads.
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, there are 4 people in my house who have the same company they work for but
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of going ,together they choose to take their own vehicle.
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increase the traffic and they usually take more time to reach their destination.
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, if we all took other means to travel,
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, train or bus it would be more convenient and will have less pollution.
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, people
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take their own vehicle because public
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is not frequently available. And if
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the government develop more public systems to travel,
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I think individuals will choose those over their own cars. In conclusion, I think it's better to invest more in public systems.
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, there is more advantage of having public
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, which is more than their disadvantages.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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