In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

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has been becoming an

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question, because of the necessity to build new homes. There are individuals who believe that preserving the environment is of pivotal importance.

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, new houses could not be built there. I am biased to consider that protect the lands is crucial for the upcoming future and generations.

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, the governments have the duty to develop strategies to solve these issue.

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, the current situation of our world is critical, because of the enormous quantity of

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. The planet and nature are in a menacing scenario.

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, in a

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context, if we consider the fact that there are places that are not able to produce their own food, and need to import from other nations.

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, the

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have no more land available

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farming.

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, it is crucial importing food from others countries to maintain the standard of

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, is one of the nations that export some kinds of food,

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as meat and corn.

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their folks and would intend to do the best for them. When it comes to the increasing

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population, it requires attention and precaution due to the fact that

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families who are

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affected. Most of them become homeless

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. Just like in my city, which is nearby Brasilia, the capital of Brazil. Here, there

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no more places to build new homes.

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, there are a plethora of communities living

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parks. I had never seen the city in

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recent days. To conclude, all

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around the world need to be aware of the environment and the terrible, querulous consequences that could happen if no one

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. Especially about the families who do not have a place to live properly. I consider

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that new public policies need to be developed, urgently.

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society could be more emphatic

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and taking care of the planet.