Topic: Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There has been much discussion revolving around the advantage of being a

traveler

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in today's technology-focussed. It seems to me that youngster visiting

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places will gain a plenty number of merits

such

as

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their awareness, make new relations, and learn uncommon insights. Three main factors support the idea of becoming a traveller. The primary factor we need to take into consideration is the precious experience offered in

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event. Every person in their travelling has to adapt

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new circumstances of places they visited.

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will

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their awareness

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how to behave in different situations. The

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merit

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view is that the interaction they potentially gain. Becoming an avounturir will bring an opportunity to be acquainted with various kind of people. When I was in Bali,

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, we met with many foreign and

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occasion consisted

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more values than we could

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. The other well-known reason for

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issue is the advantage in terms of knowledge acquired. The explorer usually

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more chances to dig deeper about culture and other traditional insights inside of the destination site.

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is very precious that because

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technologi

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technology

has

came

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rapidly, much of ethnic

informations

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is very rare nowadays. Looking from another perspective, it might be said that

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activity would cost too much, when people, like

student

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for

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example, could utilize the money to enhance their academic skill.

However

, in my opinion, taking

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free time to relax more is something fundamental to do, especially in

this

fast-changing world. In conclusion, even though travel could

spent

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some part of budgets, yet

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is still crucial to be done by every individual. In light of the above factors, I firmly believe that being

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a traveler

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traveler

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traveller

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has more benefits than

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.