Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems. Do you agree or disagree?
Some
people
consider that everyone should choose a vegetarian diet instead
of meat
. Personally, I accept the importance of eating vegetables, but at the same time, I do not agree with
that Change preposition
apply
people
extract all types of meat
from their life.
It is obvious that,
eating fruit and greens is useful Remove the comma
apply
,
because Remove the comma
apply
this
type of diet is cheaper and more healthy. It is available both
citizens with Change preposition
to both
upper
and lower level income. Add an article
an upper
Moreover
, plant-based food provide
necessary vitamins, especially fibre, which prevent us from many dangerous conditions. Consumption of Change the verb form
provides
meat
, on the other hand
, is harmful to health, because it makes cholesterol level increase. It can suppress the extinction danger of animals, so it is more
ecologically sustainable way. Add an article
a more
Additionally
, people
will be more satisfied with high
food supply and the starvations are able to decrease over time. Correct article usage
the high
Therefore
, a number of people
thinks
that, if humankind Change the verb form
think
refuse
to intake Change the verb form
refuses
meat
, they will protect the health, animals, and environment.
On the contrary
to the above idea, it is not right to reject to intake all types. Some meat
provide
proteins and useful vitamins for the body which greens can not provide. Change the verb form
provides
For example
, fish is good for the eyes, promotes brain health and can fight depression, because it contains Omega 3, moreover
, red meat
contains high biological value protein with all eight essential amino acids required by adults and all nine required by children. Another example can be chicken. B-group vitamins,
and minerals like iron, zinc, and copper make poultry Remove the comma
apply
meat
a valuable food.
In conclusion, a vegetarian diet can help a person stay fit and be environmentally friendly, but it is not right for me not to consume any meat
, because it contains a lot of useful minerals.Submitted by banucicekqurbanova on
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